Sweetness of Us
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So much more joy aches within my spirit
Where your imprint changed my shape in total
My music rewritten for you alone to hear it
While this wound I know now to be fatal
Gladly enlarge to eclipse my person
Disappearing in this new entity
Us a new self who inner strife nursing
Needs only self trust content to be
A half turned against the whole makes no sense
As one we turn there is no enemy
From whom we need walls or moat of defense
Only love pervading our psyche
I lay down then at your tender mercy
Asking only you do what you wish with me
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for not telling, you told it well. :)
"My music rewritten for you alone to hear it "... my favorite part :)
Thank you, Invictus. I am so lucky to be inspired by a great love for a special person. I am glad that others can also enjoy :)
Paper Moon, you guess the paradox of me.
Thanks so much, Felicia. That is what the poem is all about.
mmm quite a feast of poetic talent...... Not Telling, Tell me more
I'm glad you enjoy, Brenda.
How could I not
I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago
Not Telling...you really know how to melt a woman, for sure! These words speak to me the delicate steps of a deep and thriving love. Though, maybe it is because I am in a puddle. Keep em' coming, you have inspired me to write more and I can swim! lol