Sun and Flower
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I am made the sun by her content
My love shining sweetly from a blue sky
Strangely distant and intimate at once
As if I had loved her yesterday
My body’s memory of her an ache
For ever more while far away on earth
Open tenderly for radiant joy
Honored and humbled am I to bestow
Displayed magnificently fragrant
Such obviously female splendor reclined
Softly demands my complete surrender
To give all and give again until
Empty I float down a spent leaf of light
Landing as a petal in her midst
There to ever reside inside as one
Perfect happiness of layered being
Part of the greater beauty of her
Reveling in her mind and soul
Trading sweet thoughts as long as we
Shall grow together as a poem
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Then I will rest until we meet again so as to be fresh.
Your work brings me joy. I hope my work brings a little of the same to you.
You know from whence poems come: from within and without.
very pretty
Gorgeous. Oh, you were talking about my poem. I thought "very pretty" was a caption for your picture.
I read this twice , no three times, sensual in a funny sort of way.
I say, "mission accomplished" :0)
do you feel somewhat unloaded after writing all these poems.............
No, Brenda. I feel both full and empty. And I want to write another poem.
Just noticed the last line, I like it so much......
Thank you
are you still growing as a poem...... or are you Not Telling
Randy Behavior Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
How do you pump them out so fast NT, I am awed and spent.