A Fun Game

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By Not Telling

I drew this - it doesn't really look like this :)
I drew this - it doesn't really look like this :)

I saw a pretty thing

(Actually it was a tummy)

I wanted it to be mine

I desired it

I thought about it

Ways to it came to me

To make it

So I made it

Because I am a maker

So I got it

(Kind of)

I am very happy

A fun game

I wish I had something pretty

For its owner

Desirable

Thinkable

But if I don’t

It is a big universe

And

A fun game

There was a person

A pretty person

I wanted

I desired

I thought so anyway

And I got something

(Kind of)

The person

Not exactly like I thought

Not exactly as I desired

So I thought

But still and

(Surprise)

What I got

Was so much more precious

Than what

I wanted

I learned

What I really wanted

The key to it all

I am so happy

I am

Happier than ever

(I guess)

This is more than

A fun game

Comments

Carmen Borthwick profile image

Carmen Borthwick 2 years ago

Very interesting, well done.

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you, Carmen :)

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

Great visualization, indeed!

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you, Invictus! :) Make no miss take.

Miss Take 2 years ago

about it......... where is this heading.... keep going

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

...to the place where visualization...

poetlorraine 2 years ago

captures the inspiration within......

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

... a seed with destiny to grow ...

poetlorraine 2 years ago

into something quite beautiful, with the fullness of time, the perfect soil, and a sprinkling of rain water, daily

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

... the nurturer whispering songs of life and renewal ...

Am I dead, yet? 2 years ago

Ah, a poem well continued in the comments. Nice one NT!

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

A fun game, Aidy!

philip carey 61 2 years ago

I liked this one. It moves well.

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks, Philip :)

poetlorraine 2 years ago

where were we...

life and renewal... free from pain, and heartache, and on into a bountiful harvest

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Not Telling Hub Author 2 years ago

... joy and plenty, from care a rest...

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